Please, if you see anything that could be fixed, comment and tell me.

Marluxia I think that Marluxia uses his syth and cuts all there heads off. WAIT! I could do that! If only there was a Sora spite with its head cut off

good! you just started this right?
Its really good but try to stay on the story ok? You should see a picture i just did in the comics!

The story moves a bit too fast, try slowing it down.

What do you mean by that?

@Floob What he means (And i noticed it too) was that the storys events just happened like *Snap* and unexplainablely. Like Leon randomly yells Sora look out then donald duck disappears.

@ DJL:

They can't attack the Heartless because they keep jumping around.

@ DevilJet:

Leon is trying to warn Sora about the Heartless, who, before they attacked, warped Donald back to their base. This will be revealed later in the comic. Sorry if I confused you.